Peer Review 2

https://louiselyons1.wordpress.com/2016/03/24/week-4-blog-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1

Hi Louise,
I do agree with your discussion of Oodgeroo Noonuccal’s importance in Australian Literature as she was an important figure during the 1980’s with her poetry. The only comment I will say about your blog is that your quote from No More Boomerang needs to be a little more clearer as i had to re-read the sentence to understand your concept. Either drop to a new line or have a break after the end of the quote.

Apart from that, very nice piece to read and keep up the good work!

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