Peer Review 3

Hi Daniel, I really liked your blog post about Paul Cezanne’s “Banks of the Marne”, I enjoyed your reasoning for why it left an impression on you. The only thing I’d like to comment on is your statement “Artists such as Picasso, Van Gogh, Lucien Freud and Paul Cezanne were prominent icons in this Modernist movement”. Why were they prominent artists and what made them so well known in the art world? Just a another sentence on that or two would make the blog flow better as you jump from this statement into Cezanne’s work without any further discussion. Also I’d recommend you go into more detail about the context of the work. When I describe an artwork in blogs or essays, I like to imagine that the audience is blind and that you need to create this image for them. Apart from that, keep up the good work.

 

https://daniel4946.wordpress.com/2016/09/03/week-6-blog-post-4/comment-page-1/#comment-19

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One thought on “Peer Review 3

  1. That is an excellent peer review Riley! You are engaged with your peer’s blog and you make some excellent suggestions for what can be developed further.

    EDS
    *Just a another sentence (typo)= Just another sentence

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