Peer Review 1

Hi Natasha,

I loved the imagery that you created in your poem. The image created sounded like a fantasy world which i thought was beautiful but to personally, I feel that there was no change over from Winter to Spring. Could of added maybe one small stanza on Winter in the beginning. Also I liked how you referenced a 20th Century artist in your world, Pablo Picasso, showing the effect that he has made on art history. Also one other thing I’d like to add is, please be very careful of your grammar and punctuation. Apart from that I really liked your poem

https://natashahartblog.wordpress.com/2016/08/19/spring-fling/comment-page-1/#comment-19

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