Peer View 6

https://felicitymcmanus.wordpress.com/2016/05/06/6th-blog/comment-page-1/#comment-5

Hi Felicity,

I really enjoyed reading your 1st person perspective of the character’s anger of the Appin Massacre. I’m not sure if this was on purpose but i really liked how the sentence structure of being very blunt and short, this made the tone seem outraged. I feel that the persona is very personal to the insight of the Indigenous Australians which is a pressure to read a post from the time period that there was disgust among the white settlers over this issue. I also like the concept that you place at the end of unity that we all apart of “Human Nature”. Well done on your blog, I really enjoyed reading it!

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One thought on “Peer View 6

  1. Good peer reviews, but I notice that only have three of them connected to your Peer Review category. I hope you know how to connect the rest to this category. Overall your eP is looking good ! 🙂

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