Peer Review 2

Hi Maz, I really enjoyed reading your blog this week! One thing I’d like to comment on is your grammar, just make sure you proofread your work before you post it. I did find it very interesting that your “quiet” space was your local park and I liked how you thought of an example that most people would understand within your own context. I did find it a tad ironic because the chronicles of Narnia were written in the early/mid 20th century. Great work and keep it up!

https://manizhalalee.wordpress.com/2016/09/02/blog-3-2/comment-page-1/#comment-39

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  1. A good supportive peer review, but if you point to someone’s grammar you MUST be specific. That is really important. As you know it is hard to spot your own mistakes, so if you can spot someone else’s mistakes it would be really useful to point out specifically what they are đŸ™‚
    MG

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